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Over the Top

Posted by trentjamieson on May 20, 2010

I’m deep in page proofs at the moment. Carefully reading a typeset version of my book line by line, sometimes reading whole chapters aloud, never quite going as fast I would like, and always fearing that I’m not moving slow enough. It’s the contradictory nature of proofs, and you want to make sure that you find this sort of thing

I was going to put up a post on pop-culture references, but I think I’ll leave that until next week. Instead, and briefly, I thought I’d write something about not being sensible. Sometimes when you teach writing, what you are really teaching is the middle ground. The things to be aware of, the things to cut from your writing, bad habits etc. What’s harder to teach is how to let go. How to go OTT.

Because sometimes you have to.

Now you might not agree with me, because as with every writing rule, concept, manifesto whatever, it’s both right and wrong because everyone’s different. (And it’s not really a rule, it’s just me trying to avoid my proofs, I suspect)

I’m excited by prose that is controlled and reckless, dark and light, and sometimes it’s not about having a sensible amount of recklessness, or a reasonable amount of experiment, it’s about letting go entirely.

We (that’s a generalised we, and possibly a meaningless one generated to produce this argument – shoot yourself in the foot much, trent?) sometimes have an image of writing as being only one true thing: disciplined, functional, a carriage for the story, which is all well and good. But why shouldn’t it be something else too, why can’t it be like lightning on occasion, random, shocking and powerful?

William Burroughs comes to mind for me, and William Faulkner, and Emily Brontë too. Let me stress that I’m not talking about the process of the writing, or the polishing of the prose, but the writing itself. Come to think of it it’s there in all the writers I love. Now, I know I’m being a bit vague (more than a bit) and trying to describe the intangible. But I think I’m on to something – or maybe I’m just tired.

Whose prose does this to you? Whose stories have gone totally OTT and carried you along with them?

I better get back to my proofs.

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Deadlines and Days Off. Sometimes after Off Days

Posted by trentjamieson on May 13, 2010

What do you do when you hit a slump?

Writing to deadlines is a wonderful and terrible thing at the same time. Wonderful in that it makes you finish things, and finishing things ™ is the hallmark of a writing career.

Terrible in that they can exhaust you and they tend to loom, like storms, and they have the word dead in them.

The late, and wonderful Douglas Adams once said: I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.

I’m not Douglas Adams, that whooshing sound would be my editor’s deadline ninjas leaping about my study ready to pincushion me with throwing stars.

I’m a person that likes to deliver ahead of deadline, even if it’s only a few days. Though I’ve been training myself to get past that. Those few days can make all the difference between a rough draft and a much more polished manuscript. And, if you’ve read my blog entries you know how rough I can be.

But sometimes, like today, I just have to give myself a day off. Because if I don’t, I get what happened yesterday, me walking around stressing about what I have to write, and getting no writing done. It didn’t help that I have a cold, and that I’ve been working hard at the various other jobs I do, on and off, to help pay the bills. I thought despite all that I could just power through.

I couldn’t.

So today I’m going to find a place to have a coffee, read a book, and, maybe, watch a movie. And I’m not going to stress about it.

I’ve committed to produce three books to my publisher. Tomorrow I’ll get the page-proofs for book two, by the end of next week that will be done. I’m a third of the way through book three – that first draft will be done by August. But if I’m to get those things done I need to take the day off.

The secret to taking a day off is realising that you can’t work all the time, and then not feeling guilty about it. Sometimes when working from home, home becomes work and you can find yourself never switching off. Now, this can look productive, but generally, for me at any rate, it’s just me wearing myself down and managing my time poorly.

The not feeling guilty about it bit is important*. Sometimes I feel that if I’m not working nine-to-five every day then I’m not really working. Most of my adult life I have worked in bookstores, lugging boxes of returns to go back to the publisher, standing on my feet for eight hours a day then coming home and writing.

Writing nearly full-time is another kettle-of-fish entirely. Telling myself that I’ve earned it, and that I can take a day off, without feeling stressed or guilty about it is a learnt thing, and an important one for a writer’s sanity, I think. And, going by this post, maybe one I haven’t quite gotten to grips with yet.

Finally, in case it sounds like I’m complaining, I’m not. I’m loving my books and the characters within them but those characters know when I need a break, I swear. They start folding their arms and frowning at me, and they certainly don’t say the things that they should say, and the world starts to look like it’s been painted very thinly onto sheets of paper. Yesterday those sheets were slowly falling from the sky.

How do you deal with writing fatigue and taking days off?

*and it’s just as important, maybe even more so, not to feel guilty if you’re working full time and your writing slips a bit. Guilt is such a horrible thing to feel around something you love.

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The Triumph of Death

Posted by trentjamieson on May 6, 2010

Well, Thursdays come around quickly when you’ve got deadlines.  Which leads me, neatly by way of a horrible pun, to the topic today.

My soon to be released books are about Death. You know, the Grim Reaper.

I’m certainly not the first, there’s a long tradition of it, and not just starting with Terry Pratchett. For me you really can’t go past Fritz Leiber’s Death in the Fahfrd and the Grey Mouser stories. He’s a harried and irritable figure, always working against the clock and constantly stymied by the heroes of the piece – though he does give them a hard time.

But it’s not the only influence on my work. There’s a bit of Gaiman there, and touch of Pier’s Anthony’s On a Pale Horse. And finally there’s Pieter Bruegel the Elder’s painting The Triumph of Death.

That painting informs my books to a large degree.

It’s my desktop background – there’s something mesmeric about it, and if you want clues for part of what is going on in my novel you could do worse than start here. I stare at it every day. Here’s death as madness and chaos and inevitability. And yet there are still people fighting and singing – not many admittedly but they’re there. A bit like life really.

The Triumph of Death. It’s a little bit Lovecraft, it’s a little bit George Romero, hey it’s even a bit Where’s Wally? If you can see Wally in the painting let me know.

So who’s your favourite fictional incarnation of Death? And is there a piece of art that inspires you – it doesn’t have to be so grim.

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